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I really like your columns and even though you didn’t ask for suggestions, I can’t help myself. On the front of your flyer, I would eliminate the box that says beef and goats since that is obvious from the pictures. I would move Farm Stays to the beef and goats location. I would take all those QR codes off the boxes and have one box that is just the QR code in the spot where farm stays is. The barn pictures are ok but I think they would be better if they had happy people in them like the upper right picture. The interior one I would include just a happy couple suggesting the possibility of a more intimate use of the facility. The exterior one I would not use winter but in any case I would include some frolicking children to suggest another possible use. On the back side, I would delete the sentence under the box that starts with “It’s everywhere…” it seems a bit preachy. In the next sentence, I would delete “That’s why” and start with “On our farm…” I hope you find something useful in my suggestions. I can’t carry a tune in a bucket so I have no song suggestions. Good luck to you.

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How cute Beth. Love how you are open to trying new and different marketing strategies!

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Maybe I will start taking ukulele lessons again to accompany my rendition of this fabulous song!! :D

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I love this, of course. Writing a song through AI?! Who knew?

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A farm “Psalm” is actually a catchy idea.

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I LOVE it!!! A Midwestern Psalm - I recommend sending this to the Weary Ramblers - Chad Elliot and Katherine Severing Fox. They are the perfect singer/songwriter duo and musical magicians in their own right. I would pay good money to hear what solutions they might develop.

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